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Love is everything without a place

love is feeling without a face

love is emotion felt in your heart

love is missing when far apart

 

Love is remembering what life is about

love is forgetting if you’re sane or if you’re f***ed

love is wanting a dream to come true

love is wearing whatever feels new

 

Love is wanting each second to last

love is tying your ship to a mast

love is wanting it never to end

love it drives you around the bend

 

Love is precious to everyone

love is endless, like the sun

love is believing deep in your mind

 

~XDream

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Cheesy Poem I Know....Lol I Kinda Got Blcoked At Thee End... OI Well More Will Come, And Much Better Ones!!!!

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It is very clear where you lost your way but it still came out to be a very good poem.... many truths are written in but the few i always write 2 everyone is

love is the pain that ruins our start

love is what makes us blind though the years

love is the unholy emotion that control us all

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I thought you portrayed the emotion very well in your poem. I really liked it, and I can't wait to read more from you.

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wow that's a really good poem. i kinda wish i could write poems as good as this one. keep it up :)

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i really like your poems dream, i've recently gotten into poetry and i love reading ones about love or death so keep it i want to ead more from you ;)

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also i like collecting poems and putting them on my myspace DarkDream do mind if i do that with your poems that i like, ill make sure i give you credit

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to me if you really love someone one then you'll do anything for them, give your life for them, let them go if it's for the best, if you continue to love them rather they love you back or not

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good poem its not cheezy at all i like the way it sounds

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LOVE IT

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i love it dream im a sap when it comes to romantics =-)

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